don’t worry, I’ve gotten plenty of critiques in my life as a author. My skill is more so in the art department anyway, I’d love to do art for somebody else’s story, but the opportunity has not come up yet so I’m just doing it on my own
I highly appreciate people who take time out of their day to tell me where I can improve so I highly appreciate your comments and will be continuing making games with it in mind.
Cool! I’ve also collaborated with two of my artsy friends for two of my visual novels so far. So, I’m always down for collaborating, too, if you’re interested.
I actually really like your art. It’s cute and colorful. My only critique is that it sometimes looks flat in some places, but I think that was the point, and my art is flatter, anyway. 😅
Otherwise, I’m pretty flexible. They gave me art, and I would just build a story around said art. Examples include When Winter Comes and Vibrant Love on my page.
I mainly write coming-of-age dramas or romances that are wholesome or angsty, but I’ve dabbled in writing in the fantasy and horror genres before. Examples include The Power of Friendship and Curse on my page.
I can work with a character sprite and a background or just a character sprite. A lot of my earlier works were self-contained stories like that, especially since they were for game jams. Examples include A Night Out, Class in Session, and Beach Waves on my page.
I can also do branching paths that diverge into different plots or nuanced routes like in Mother and Love Days on my page.
I’ve successfully done 25 game jams in total, and it usually takes me on average two weeks to a month to complete a visual novel. It can take me a week or less to write a good short story.
I have Reddit, FB, Snapchat, YouTube, email, and this account if you’re interested in collaborating with me further.
I'd love to collaborate! I normally do themed dating sims or stuff like strawberry darling, currently I have beyond the stars [zodiac theme], Yoshi [place holder name but it's a Tamagotchi creepypasta/yandere game], chocolate mafia [place holder name again, theme is clear there], and a few others I'd like to do but they all are ether dating sims or yandere games.
the only places we could really talk this over I have is discord, Instagram, and email
Whoo! I have Discord, but I never use it. You can hit me up at shelbylnofer@gmail.com.
if you’re more comfortable with Discord, I can see about setting that up, too.
I used to be into astrology and creepypastas, and I’m always down for a good dating sim, too. I’ve been meaning to write a yandere VN, as well. So, those ideas work for me. We can also start from scratch with a new idea, too.
