Thank you so much for this, I really appreciate both the feedback and the enthusiasm 🖤
My plan is to go back and do a proper read-through once I’ve fully updated Chapter 1, and fix the grammar issues then. At some point I’ll probably also need beta readers, because this project is getting… big 😅
English isn’t my first language, and when I write at like 3 a.m. my brain absolutely goes feral, so yeah things slip through. But cleaning up the grammar is definitely one of my top goals.
I’m really glad you’re enjoying the world and the characters so far and I’m very happy Ace is already your downfall 😌