This was a very interesting premise so far, but definitely needs another read-over or two for the grammatical errors I encountered. Some sentences make little sense and some sentence structures get used wrong - which happens to the best of us.
Definitely not to the point of not recommending this however, it's an incredibly interesting world. Gritty, dirty, more than a little deranged -- looking at you Maud. So far Having only met Ace, I can already tell this character will be my downfall, the realistic hopeful to my pessimistic cynic. It will be grand.
[Incredibly excited for future updates because I WILL be following this like a hawk]