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No logic, just girl math xD (the other one's were basically just red herrings)

I was really hoping those references would feel meaningful rather than just thrown in, so knowing they resonated with you like that makes me really happy!! But if you feel like something is not represented correctly/doesn't feel like your culture, don't hesitate to tell me. I'm always open for feedback and suggestions :) 

The fact that you replayed from scratch just to properly absorb everything?? That’s such an incredible compliment 😭

I’m so, so happy the reveal and those moments landed for you. That closet passage was one of those scenes that just sat with me while writing it, so knowing it hit emotionally makes me ridiculously relieved. (I am both sorry for the tears and absolutely not sorry at all.)

“The coffee tastes like it died hours ago…” becoming fridge magnet material is maybe the highest honor I could hope for. (My Mom likes to say something similar, when her coffee does not hit the way she wants it to xD)

And the rage?? The feral energy?? Completely valid. Entirely understandable. We are, of course, a calm and logical society. Obviously. Definitely. (Invoice denied, though. Emotional damage is included in the base experience.)

Thank you for rambling. Please never stop rambling. Comments like this genuinely fuel me to keep writing. 🖤

Thank you so much! I can't wait to properly introduce the RO's in CH 2 :)

Nope, you're on the right track :D

You have my blessing xD

Fixed :)

Do you know in which part/scene that was? I can't find it :/

Thank you so much for this, I really appreciate both the feedback and the enthusiasm 🖤

My plan is to go back and do a proper read-through once I’ve fully updated Chapter 1, and fix the grammar issues then. At some point I’ll probably also need beta readers, because this project is getting… big 😅

English isn’t my first language, and when I write at like 3 a.m. my brain absolutely goes feral, so yeah things slip through. But cleaning up the grammar is definitely one of my top goals.

I’m really glad you’re enjoying the world and the characters so far and I’m very happy Ace is already your downfall 😌

Yes :) If you don’t click on anything you shouldn’t get any piercings etc. But there is a persistent bug that when you click and then unclick something it will still appear in your description but it should be fixed with the new update coming soon. For now just don’t click on anything that you don’t want 😊

Thank you!! Haha me too. I wish I could just share the whole story right now :(( But this year my goal is to write/update as much as I can 👌 

That’s the plan :) 

Aaaah thank you so much!!🖤

Hearing that the writing feels novel-like makes me soo happy. Maybe one day I could really become a full-time writer (that would be the dream job)

I’m so glad the lore and MC clicked with you too, they’re my little chaos child and I love letting them run wild on the page.

Updates are in the works, and I can’t wait to show you more of this messy, morally questionable world! 💀✨

Maud winning “Sister of the Year” is so funny because she would accept that award with blood on her shirt and zero irony 😭👏

And I love the dynamic your MC has with Maud ^^

And ohhhh the Luz situation… I think I already answered it on Tumblr but Maud ships it lol

AND A WEB SERIES??? A WHOLE CARTOON???

Please, I’d evaporate on the spot. But also… the amount of chaos these characters would cause in animated form?

Unhinged. Completely unhinged. 🖤 

I wish I could animate now tbh🥺

Thank you so much!! 🖤 I’m so happy you enjoyed it. You’re totally right: both siblings were “saved,” just in very different (and very messy) ways.

And Maud is the younger sibling. Believe me, there are many badass moments to come.

And if you want more badass MC moments right now, I‘d recommend doing the War Correspondent Path and not choosing the Nasir affair route (I’m sorry) because you’ll meet Maud under very different circumstances 👀

That’s what I call priorities!! 🤭 Gotta keep that work–life–chaos balance! And yesss, Maud is the drama, the chaos, and part of the heart 🖤 thank you so much for playing!!

Aww that’s so sweet!! 🖤 I’m so happy you’re enjoying it already, welcome to the fixation club, I have snacks and emotional damage ✨

Aww thank you!! 😂 I’m so glad you liked that detail, MC totally uses quotes as emotional armor. In the next update you‘ll find out more👀 

Ahhh thank you so much!! 🖤 I’m so glad you enjoyed it and that Ace already has you in their corner (they’re gonna love that). I promise you’ll get to meet the rest of the ROs soon enough and Maud has plenty more chaos to bring 👀

I know the “found it too early” pain, but hey, now you get to grow along with the story! ✨ Thank you for joining me on this IF journey, hope you're ready for a wild ride!

Thanks!! Should be fixed now :)

Thank you so much, this made me smile so big!! (≧▽≦) I’m really glad the story hooked you already, that’s such a huge compliment.

And thank you for pointing out the pronoun errors! I actually just replayed it myself and didn’t run into any issues, so if you could send a bug report with screenshots of where it happens, that would help me track it down and fix it. I want everyone’s MC to feel right in the story.

Can’t wait to share more with you soon, you’ll be meeting the other ROs before you know it ;)

Thank you so much!! Hearing it’s already one of your favourites after just Ch 1 Pt.1 makes me so happy~ I can’t wait to share more :)

Ahh okay, so the issue is still happening… I’ll look into fixing it as soon as I have more time. This week is orientation week at my new uni, and next week my semester starts, so things are a bit hectic right now. But once I settle into a rhythm, I’ll dig into the problem and try to sort it out :)

YESS a true Maud defender!! She needs people like you in her corner 🖤 

Fun Fact: She was the first fleshed out character for this story, even before MC

Thank you!! I’m so glad Chapter 1 Pt. 1 is already received so well.

And I’m sorry but Nasir is way too much fun to write… but don’t worry, the actual ROs are coming in hot in Chapter 2 👀

Thank you!! I’m really glad you’re enjoying it so far :)

AHH thank you, I’m so happy you think so!! ✧｡٩(ˊᗜˋ )و✧*｡

Thank you!! Someone on Tumblr pointed this out to me and I will add some more platonic choices once I publish the next part of chapter 1, so the people who don’t want to romance a character have more options to choose from that will align with their mc’s personality :)

Ahhh thank you so much!! 🖤 I’m so happy the characters and writing pulled you in like that. I’m already working on the next part because all your lovely messages have fired me up 🔥

Ahhh this made me smile so much, thank you!! Hearing that you were hooked from the prologue makes me so happy ♡ Can’t wait to keep building on it!

I’m so glad you enjoyed both the worldbuilding and the characters🖤 More is on the way ✨

Thank you!! I can’t wait to share more with you soon~ ദ്ദി(｡•̀ ᴗ -)✧

RIGHT?? She’s such a little menace. I love writing all her wrongness, it’s what makes her hilarious 😂 

That’s the best kind of stress to hear about 😂 Thank you so much!! I promise there’s plenty more to come ദ്ദി(｡•̀ ᴗ -)✧

Ahhh thank you!! (≧▽≦) I’m so happy you’re enjoying the writing + customization, it really means a lot. And haha yes… sadly you do have to choose between E or Arden 💔 (the angst is half the fun, right?). Can’t wait to share the next update with you👀

I’m glad it caught your interest!! Can’t wait to share more soon~

Thank you so much!! That means a lot to hear (≧▽≦)

Whaaat up ‘til 4am?? That’s the highest compliment you could give me (and also I apologize to your sleep schedule 💀) I’m so happy you enjoyed it and yep, believe it or not that was only Chapter 1 Pt.1… there’s still so much more ahead. Thank you for reading and sticking around, it means the world!!✧