Thank you for your suggestion!
The Landlord is not a bad guy.
I already thought about editing Chapter 2, expecially its ending. But I want to try and save it on Chapter 4.
Clara is still pretty confused, she knows that Phil it's not the right fit for Dawn, and that Dawn is not living her best life, but she doesn't know what Dawn best life could be and why is she trying so hard to help her.
About NTR, she will cheat on Phil for sure, more than she already have I mean.
I'm not sure if I will add a scene where She gets pounded while Phil sleeps in the bed besides her, but If the story will lead to it I will.
Suggestion are always accepted, I like the "Dawn's lust is unable to be controlled and how Dawn would ever do it with Clara or make Clara understand the crazy lustful machine she ended up making" part, I'll take in consideration in the future!

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