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This would be a suggestion I have in mind for the story(you don't need to read it since I think it would be very hard to make since you would need to change things on chapter 2 in terms of dialogue or straight up change everything on the next chapters)

You could make the landlord be actually a good guy...he would behave like he did in chapter 1 maybe by his sleeping problems and by some problems he tends to have with some of the people what debt them rent.So when he check the cameras he would still be surprised but instead of smile at it he would be confused and wouldn't know how to react (because at first he thought that Dawn did something what helped him to finally sleep so he would feel better and that would make him feel happy since someone would trust him and feel comfortable around him...and (this could also be something optional) what the boy said about his mother being near of the landlord would actually be true by maybe her being the landlord's sister) and would try to talk with Dawn on the moment he managed to talk with her...Dawn's lust would be so much that she would maybe don't listen and straight up try to take off his pants...he would be very confused and wouldn't know how to react and when Dawn do his thing his body would start acting by instinct and wouldn't act like he act (just like when a woman is VERY horny but instead being a man who's unable to hold his lust now)

And would make Clara react surprised and worried (since Clara just tried to made Dawn not be with Dilph since he was actually passively leaving her and made her see it and be free and find someone who actually loves her...but Clara maybe didn't wanted Dawn to start to become crazy of lust because let's be honest...Clara is lustful but I'm pretty sure she would know how to hold herself) to when Dawn's lust is unable to be controlled and how Dawn would ever do it with Clara or make Clara understand the crazy lustful machine she ended up making

I don't suggest NTR because it would be quite lame and not good for story but instead make it to what happens if a person leads another person to satiate his list even if that person's list is insatiable...and how much a person would become if only his lust was controlling his mind

I know this is large...is just a suggestion and I don't mind if you don't like it or if you ignored it...I just wanted to drop what I thought after I played the game

A Ton Pixels13 days ago(+1)

Thank you for your suggestion!

The Landlord is not a bad guy.

I already thought about editing Chapter 2, expecially its ending. But I want to try and save it on Chapter 4.

Clara is still pretty confused, she knows that Phil it's not the right fit for Dawn, and that Dawn is not living her best life, but she doesn't know what Dawn best life could be and why is she trying so hard to help her.

About NTR, she will cheat on Phil for sure, more than she already have I mean.

I'm not sure if I will add a scene where She gets pounded while Phil sleeps in the bed besides her, but If the story will lead to it I will.

Suggestion are always accepted, I like the "Dawn's lust is unable to be controlled and how Dawn would ever do it with Clara or make Clara understand the crazy lustful machine she ended up making" part, I'll take in consideration in the future!

Yuhaoransb66612 days ago(+1)

I think it's a really cool detail that Dawn can't help but indulge in her wild sexual desires at midnight—that hungover, dissociated feeling reminds me of 《Hotline Miami》which was a dope

Lemux@3411 days ago(+1)

Holy...I didn't expected to be replied by the creator...thank you so much by reading my consideration...

By the way I'm doing a version zombie(or what replaces the color of the skin into grey colors) of Dawn and I didn't finished it yet...I would need to show it on postimage since for some reason itch.io doesn't let me send images... I'm wondering if you would like to see it when I finished it

A Ton Pixels11 days ago

Yes please!

Lemux@3411 days ago(+1)

Well... I didn't finished it yet and I need to finish the normal Dawn since I finished with the maid Dawn but here's the progress(I just did a change of colors on the pixels with grey colors and some details and the lips I made them red so they would be more noticed)

I don't know if you can see it(if not then go to the link) but I hope you like this zombie version of dawn(even if I didn't finished it yet)

It took me like 4 hours to manage to put pixels on it(I don't know if 4 hours are a lot on terms of pixel art but I guess is a bit long) in Ibispaint

I hope you like it :)

Lemux@3411 days ago(+1)

Now that I'm noticing it looks more like a robot that a zombie XD

A Ton Pixels11 days ago

I like it!

I don't know if it's a long time, I take a long ass time to draw anything :/

Lemux@3410 days ago(+1)

I don't know either buddy, don't worry

Lemux@349 days ago(+1)

Now...I managed to do it...I manage to finish what I informed to you what I was going to make...but then a blackout ended up happening in my country, making me unable to use wifi and send the images...so...since I was bored...I decided to screenshot some parts in the game and decided to make some visual changes in those...you could say is like a fan art using as the base of the drawing the real image in game

Here's the zombie Dawn I promised and also the drawings I decided to made while I waited the light to arrive in my block:

I hope you like them :) ...though I don't know if they're good or a bit bad...you tell me buddy

A Ton Pixels9 days ago

Jesus...

I like them!

Not gonna lie, I will probably still the photos on the fridge and the calendar thing idea.

Probably the red shirt has too much contrast for my tastes but they are not bad

Lemux@348 days ago(+1)

Holy :0..are you for real?...I mean...on the best outcome I thought was that you would like them...I didn't expected that you may consider to put some of the things I did in your game(or that maybe you reference them)

But thanks...and yeah...I started noticing that the red shirt was a bit contrast...sorry for that...I will see if I can fix it...but thanks for the compliment

Btw while I was playing trying to get screenshots to redraw parts of the game...I managed to get a good screenshot of the moment Dawn shows a photo of his dress(the lewd one) and also the perfect screenshot I managed to get on the moment that Dawn and his bestie(I forget his name) get out of the male bathroom before going to dance

Here's the progress I managed to do in both of them:

And if you ask about HOW THE F*** I managed to make almost everything change of color...well...I just used a whole black screen as a secondary cape(o como se diga capa de dibujo en ingles) and set in the settings to be on tone(o como se diga tono en inglés) and this result showed up...(I find it out just by messing a bit around)

A Ton Pixels8 days ago

Cool!