Thanks for the detailed feedback!
The writing was definitely raw, I did 0 rewrites aside from spelling and grammar. I think I wanted it to feel like "real" messages but in retrospect, I think doing a couple passes to make sure the tone and flow were tight would have benefited the experience.
Also duely noted about the music, I think even an extra 20 seconds on the main loop and a separate short track for the credits would have made it feel more polished.
Thanks for playing, cheers!