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This is such an interesting experience; it’s incredible how much emotion and story could be told in such a little time. First of all, the premise and setting of this game are a very clever interpretation of the jam’s theme, leading to an interesting ‘tether’ mechanic that, in the end, delivers a very painful and satisfying message. I do think you totally nailed it when it comes to the emotional impact/ making the player curious and invested in the little bits of the story. The writing is (slightly) rough around the edges, but I quite enjoy it. The only thing that could use an improvement, I think, is the sound, which might be too repetitive. Overall, great job!!!

Thanks for the detailed feedback! 

The writing was definitely raw, I did 0 rewrites aside from spelling and grammar. I think I wanted it to feel like "real" messages but in retrospect, I think doing a couple passes to make sure the tone and flow were tight would have benefited the experience. 

Also duely noted about the music, I think even an extra 20 seconds on the main loop and a separate short track for the credits would have made it feel more polished.

Thanks for playing, cheers!