Firstly, I want to thank you for pointing out the typos and errors. Unfortunately, some of them go unnoticed even when I reread the script, and working on the script alone makes it increasingly difficult to reread it and check if anything has been overlooked. I have fixed the ones that were pointed out, and they will be fixed when the next build is released.
Secondly, I'm glad you were interested, and I don't know if you saw it, but from the screenshots I noticed that you played Path D, which is more of a secondary path and has been put on hold for now, and I'm updating Path A more. The changes themselves are few. Path A is when you decide to eventually open up to Jack on day 2, and from there to the end of Path D. The changes are minor, some more playful interactions between Raymond and Jack, but what's more relevant is the conversation between the two lying in the bedroom and the final unfolding of day 7. And of course, Path A has Chapter 2 Act 1 done. If you're interested, you can even use the Chapter Select and skip to Chapter 1 Act 4 to see how the story unfolds in the most updated Path. Ideally, it would be best to play from the beginning, but again, it's more playful interactions and Raymond being friendlier with Jack in general, also some ship hints. The main change between the two paths would be more in Chapter 2, so I decided to pause Path D and focus on Path A