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So after reading this masterpiece I've noticed some typos and/or errorrs, like five or seven in total. I have no idea where to upload those so im just going to dump them here i guess (maybe should've taken screenshot of everything)

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"1nd corridor", ig that was supposed to be 2 instead of 1 or st instead of nd, i don't want to remember where he lived

"between late nigh" i giggled here

Just Jack nonchalantly saying Raymond's thoughts

No idea about this one, now I'm done and don't know why I've taken screenshot of this. Might be because this was supposed to be Raymond's thought, and then someone was saying the same thing outloud? No idea so probably doesn't matter.

All of these might be intentional, cuz what do i know, I'm not the dev. I don't have exact days when these lines happened so yeah, might be hard finding them.

For context, I was so stressed throughout the entire thing, so these little mistakes were really noticable and helped with stress. Not to hate on the project or anything. It was a nice breathe from all of dating romances on itch io. To the point where i had to pull out ai to figure out the Ceaser cipher.

Noble Shamrock14 days ago

Firstly, I want to thank you for pointing out the typos and errors. Unfortunately, some of them go unnoticed even when I reread the script, and working on the script alone makes it increasingly difficult to reread it and check if anything has been overlooked. I have fixed the ones that were pointed out, and they will be fixed when the next build is released.

Secondly, I'm glad you were interested, and I don't know if you saw it, but from the screenshots I noticed that you played Path D, which is more of a secondary path and has been put on hold for now, and I'm updating Path A more. The changes themselves are few. Path A is when you decide to eventually open up to Jack on day 2, and from there to the end of Path D. The changes are minor, some more playful interactions between Raymond and Jack, but what's more relevant is the conversation between the two lying in the bedroom and the final unfolding of day 7. And of course, Path A has Chapter 2 Act 1 done. If you're interested, you can even use the Chapter Select and skip to Chapter 1 Act 4 to see how the story unfolds in the most updated Path. Ideally, it would be best to play from the beginning, but again, it's more playful interactions and Raymond being friendlier with Jack in general, also some ship hints. The main change between the two paths would be more in Chapter 2, so I decided to pause Path D and focus on Path A

Elkot14 days ago

Oh, that was fast fix for you. That's some good knowledge of the script, also identifying Path D from a couple of screenshots, hello? And thanks for mentioning Path A and chapter 2. Originally i thought there was no difference when talking to Jack because both options seemed very rude and sounded like "fuk off i am not talking about my past" type of thing. But thanks a lot i will definitely be reading through chapter 2, and then go back to chapter 1, Path A.

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