Loved the art and the concept of the game! I enjoyed how small things like leaving a note can change your route and how Freya changed over time!
If I had one piece of advice for further games it would be to maybe slow down the pacing a bit. I think this game would've been even better if scenes had taken a bit more time (and more detail) especially when you do your first run (but it might also have felt weird to me since it took Owen's hand first which wasn't a good route to start in my opinion).