Nice stuff! Reminds me of Will You Snail music. My only criticism would be that the track ended too quickly. I feel like you could have expanded the ending. Including a section with a different texture and melody to complement the rest of the song or something to that effect that could give the listener more. Either way this is great for your first try with this style.
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Yeah I would have liked to give it a bigger middle 8 palate cleanse section and/or let it go round a few more times at the end. I just kept it short and sweet this time since it’s a loop. And I didn’t want to keep adding and possibly ruin it yknow?
It’s good that listeners want more though! Could be worse haha