I think this is one of the most polished games in the jam, at least among the ones I’ve tried so far. I even watched Navy play through your game in live, and it was clear that she spent a good amount of time engaged with it. That alone says a lot about how well the game holds the player’s attention.
The art style isn’t really my personal taste, but I can definitely recognize how well executed it is. The main menu screen, in particular, looks amazing: the use of dithering in the pixel art and the dark, moody color palette work extremely well. The way the theme is interpreted is also interesting and, more importantly, original, which gives the game an extra point in my book.