Hi! Thanks for the game.
At page 10, there's a part that is totally obscure to me:
"Shed - Have your character exit the story, and switch to a new character. Repeat steps 2 through 4 of Setting Out, with a new notecard."
I can't find the specified steps.
Also, at page 11 (I'm reading the Dawn file, right now), there are several reference to other pages, but the specified pages are wrong. I suppose you grew the text and missed to update the references.