This was a cute story. The characters were sweet, and the story had an overall wholesome vibe to it. The fortune card game was a fun little addition. I liked that each card had a different design on them that fit with what the card said. Giving the non-romanceable profile images was a nice touch and gave them a bit of personality.
The background were nice, as were the character sprites, though the contrast between the two styles felt a little odd to me. I don’t think it was bad, but it did make the characters really stand out from the scene as a whole.
The achievements worked well. They felt reasonable to get and were a nice touch.
All in all, I think your updates and additions worked well for your game.