this is so good! your art shines as usual and your use of renpy is solid. i really like the music and the way you use it to enhance the tone of scenes.
i'm playing this on mobile in browser, and after i'm told to point at a certain person, it crashes. renpy kinda sucks in browser and especially on mobile so i'm not sure if there's a fix or if it's even something you did. will download on my computer to finish.
either way, great job, i love this!