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Hey, changing font types felt a little be jarring. It went from simple font to high def serif then back to a simple font. The scrolling was way to fast to read, which also effected the mood a bit. It seems like a slow atmospheric game, and the super fast text through me out of that a bit.

The sound was great but cut off abruptly after the chapter had ended.

The tone and atmosphere good. It had me feeling tense.

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Thank you so much for taking the time to play it and for such thoughtful feedback,  it’s really helpful 😊

I’ve already made some adjustments based on your comments. I’ve unified the chapter fonts and kept Cinzel, which is the same font used in the book index, and I’ve also increased the font size and contrast to improve readability.

Regarding the scrolling speed, it was intentionally accelerated so the video wouldn’t be too long. In the actual gameplay, the text scrolls at half that speed, maintaining a slower and more atmospheric pace.

Thanks again for your time and your feedback, it’s genuinely valuable for continuing the development of the game!!! 

I hope to have something new to show very soon. 😉

Best regards, and Merry Christmas!!!!!!!!!!!!