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hewoo, happy to hear ya took time to read, so i will respond to wich point!

1- I made the first part 3 years ago and at time, i was sure how the story would go so far in terms of progress, so i had made James sudently went to Hyvindle, but i can make better with time to be less vague. The part of idea of being a dream or coma is totaly bad for me, i hate when that plot of being all a dream or the mc was in a coma, always been a bit ridiculous to me xD. So my intent is that really happened.

2-I think I made up clear James thought was a set for movie or something in the genre, and that the village was empty because they had to go to the castle.

3-I wanted to do something a bit like narnia and how even if it's a different world they can understand each other and the text in the books is just something i made up while doing the art haha.

4-Will try to take care of it in future!

ty again for reading , any fav character, moment ot scene ya would like to share or even theories?

Videojugador6 days ago

Hi, thanks for taking the time to reply to my rambling. Just to clarify a few things:

1- The part about waking up in his world with the excuse that "it was all a dream" was more like him believing, for a single moment, that it had all been a dream, leading the reader to fall into the trap of thinking, as you rightly said that it would be a ridiculous ending, that James dreamed it or that he was in a coma. But that in reality, it all happened.

2- You're absolutely right, you wrote that the town was empty, but I don't know, it seems strange to me that instead of investigating the town further, he goes into the biggest house he sees and starts snooping around. But I understand that you did it to make the encounter with Dylus seem like fate, I suppose.

3- I see where you're going with this; I was just saying that it could be a concept you might use, given that the history of that world is ancient. The idea that he can speak and read any language from that world could justify him, for example, being able to read messages/runes/texts from that era in the future (assuming it's a different language than the one spoken in this lore; otherwise, forget everything mentioned above).

Finally, for now, I'm interested in the lion brothers. I know they haven't been shown much and only started developing as characters in the last update, but I hope to see more of them in the future, both interacting with James and demonstrating that they and their people have changed since their father's reign.

Thank you very much, and sorry for rambling on again.

Kur6 days ago

No worries love to get feedback on my vn! Any theories for the future of the story? :3

Videojugador6 days ago

Well… I don't know if you should consider these theories, but first, since the story is linear, I'm ruling out several endings. That said:

1- Although I haven't seen it yet, if there were a romance, I think it could be between James and Dylus, since Dylus is very protective of him and has seen his strength, determination, and how James defends those Dylus considers his family. However, I could also be wrong, and there might not be a romance, or Dylus could end up with Princess Anori or another character.

2- It would make sense for James to face the Seven Deadly Sins to become stronger, which would justify his increased power in order to face the final villain. This would help better control the pacing and events of the story, dividing it into segments.

3- Since Harobes wanted to go to the Sheep Kingdom to learn diplomacy, it could be a good time for him to act as a representative and go with Dylus to meet James. Perhaps he could get involved with the Sins or the Boar Witch on the way or while he's there.

4- It's unclear to me whether Ravous is truly good or if he'll betray us, since he doesn't hesitate to kill to protect his collection. He could even become a new sin, like wrath or greed, if the story allows it.

5- James is likely to develop more powers. So far, he's shown communication with souls, increased strength, and superhuman determination, although some of these might have been circumstantial or one-off occurrences. Even so, I expect to see more "fantastic" abilities that he can acquire or develop, especially if he has to face dark and chaotic forces, and, of course, because of what King Morih told him—you know, about being chosen and becoming a warrior.

Having said that, I know I haven't talked much about the novel's story, such as other gods (now that I think about it, James might encounter one who's on his side and helps him... getting back to the point), or other kingdoms, since I believe that as a reader, I should leave this to the author to develop and nurture. I eagerly await how you develop this story and hope it lasts a long time, because there are novels whose worlds deserve to remain alive, and I think this one does. But please, update the novel regularly so we can get our necessary dose of purple wolf and blond human.

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