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No worries love to get feedback on my vn! Any theories for the future of the story? :3

Well… I don't know if you should consider these theories, but first, since the story is linear, I'm ruling out several endings. That said:

1- Although I haven't seen it yet, if there were a romance, I think it could be between James and Dylus, since Dylus is very protective of him and has seen his strength, determination, and how James defends those Dylus considers his family. However, I could also be wrong, and there might not be a romance, or Dylus could end up with Princess Anori or another character.

2- It would make sense for James to face the Seven Deadly Sins to become stronger, which would justify his increased power in order to face the final villain. This would help better control the pacing and events of the story, dividing it into segments.

3- Since Harobes wanted to go to the Sheep Kingdom to learn diplomacy, it could be a good time for him to act as a representative and go with Dylus to meet James. Perhaps he could get involved with the Sins or the Boar Witch on the way or while he's there.

4- It's unclear to me whether Ravous is truly good or if he'll betray us, since he doesn't hesitate to kill to protect his collection. He could even become a new sin, like wrath or greed, if the story allows it.

5- James is likely to develop more powers. So far, he's shown communication with souls, increased strength, and superhuman determination, although some of these might have been circumstantial or one-off occurrences. Even so, I expect to see more "fantastic" abilities that he can acquire or develop, especially if he has to face dark and chaotic forces, and, of course, because of what King Morih told him—you know, about being chosen and becoming a warrior.

Having said that, I know I haven't talked much about the novel's story, such as other gods (now that I think about it, James might encounter one who's on his side and helps him... getting back to the point), or other kingdoms, since I believe that as a reader, I should leave this to the author to develop and nurture. I eagerly await how you develop this story and hope it lasts a long time, because there are novels whose worlds deserve to remain alive, and I think this one does. But please, update the novel regularly so we can get our necessary dose of purple wolf and blond human.