Thank you for the feedback! And I don't think it was rude at all, don't worry!! Seeing as I'm the only person working on 14DWY (and the DLC), this means I'm usually the only one who playtests everything as well. Some things will slip past me, so I really appreciate you taking the time to point them out and explain everything!! Otherwise, I'm sure I would've missed them entirely ^^;
When I have time to focus and prioritise the DLC again, I'll see what I can do about all the scenes involving Ren fingering a player who tops, the inconsistencies, and some of the wording/phrasing used!
And since you asked for clarification... Most of the scenes you mentioned were written with full penetration in mind (i.e. getting penetrated by Ren's private parts, as opposed to his fingers or tongue). I didn't want to exclude tops from this — since I know everyone has different preferences — but in hindsight, tops that don't mind getting fingered/stimulated could probably just choose the versatile option instead.
Alongside that, some scenes were written in a way that makes it difficult to turn into a top variation, as they would require me to rewrite everything from scratch — and such exclusivity wouldn't be fair for verse and bottom players. Some examples I can think of are the rainy alleyway scene in Day 2 (Ren isn't the type to use Angel for his own pleasure or shove their hands down his pants that early on in the game) and the couch scene in Day 5 (Angel is sitting in Ren's lap, which makes switching their positions difficult). If a bottom player wanted to be the one to rub their hands against Ren or have him sit in their lap, it wouldn't be fair to make them choose the top option just for that, y'know?? But also... I wouldn't want top players to feel like an afterthought, nor would I want to rewrite the 18+ scenes and have major discrepancies between the free and paid versions, as well as the position variations. I also have to factor in the perspective of tops/verses who use strap-ons vs their actual genitalia (and how differently they can be stimulated), and there's already a lot more going on that I'm worried that if I change one thing, it will become a problem for another.
Soooo yeah!! ^^; There's a whole bunch of stuff I need to factor in and keep track of from this DLC alone, so it's difficult for me to make major changes without having to restructure other things as well. Nevertheless, I truly appreciate you bringing this up and sharing your thoughts! It would've slipped past my notice otherwise ghjsjgj
Also... I know you're aware of this and have acknowledged it (thank you!!), but I do want to gently remind everyone else that the DLC is still a major WIP, as noted on the Itch page. I wouldn't want to mislead anyone, make them believe that the position variants are without fault, or give the impression that the current state of the top variant is final!
