Thank you so much for doing a complete version! I noticed that some of the chapters seemed to have a lot of repetition, e.g. in the early chapters I think Rhod commands the company to "take a rest" or similar in a lot of chapters, and down in the dark Rhod's torch is "almost out" in four-five chapters in a row. This seemed quite fitting when the chapters were "disconnected", but might be something you'd want to edit for a full version?