Nice to see you gave it another pass, I managed to finish it this time.
There are still some rough spots, but the game is simple and clear enough that they don’t stop you from progressing anymore, which is a big step up. The story is pretty straightforward, but it fits the jam theme well. If you keep working on it, I think adding more enemies or making the boss fights a bit deeper would help a lot.
You’ve got the basics down and it’s cool to see you sticking with these jams. Keep at it!