Ditto on the inaction vice in the background. Not chronic depression, but something else that made me act very similarly at a point in my life. Did a very good job at portraying it.
A certain character yelling at us about it also tore my heart out.
You did such a good job, especially with the more period-appropriate language. My friends and I talked about how hard it is to make intelligence come across in fiction, and yet you did well at that with Sherlock/MC. I have not smiled at any piece of fiction nearly as much as I have smiled at yours. High smile to word ratio. Probably because of this and the romance which was *chef's kiss*. I love the more tsundere and oblivious romance options, as well as the straightforward ones.
I will sadly have to join the crew of people pulling for Watson and Lestrade, to the exclusion of H (sorry! Seems like my type in real life, even if not in IF, and from what I've seen on your tumblr it might be because—aside from the wealth—they are a bit too similar to me and not in the way that breaks my brain in half and makes me desperately want them. Not your fault).
Amazing job.
Also, is there anywhere I can report typos to you?