Yep, I know you have a proofreader already. I was just offering. Didn't know constant was a synonym for faithful though, I've never heard it used that way before.
Anyway, the writing is always good on these stories. You already know I love their dynamic so any time I see a Tavi/Yuel game, I grab it (assuming I know it is one). You weren't kidding about this one being erotica lol. Certainly nothing wrong with that, and I liked seeing a game from Tavi's perspective. I'd love to see more like that, and it makes me wonder what's going through his head in previous games with them you've made.
Honestly the only thing that I wind up considering when I play these is whether I like the art or not.
So far, my favorite artist you use is the one who worked on Unluckily in Love (I especially like how dark Tavi's complexion is in that case and I LOVE his pouting face).
The art for this one is okay, but a few of the sprites just look kinda strange to me. Mostly when Tavi is smirking, his lips look a little odd, like half his mouth is sewn shut. The CGs aren't terrible though. I wish it wasn't so censored, but I know itch has been cracking down on such things (for some reason) so I don't hold it against anyone.