So, I got stuck on the game part because it’s incredibly confusing and/or buggy. The minigame at the beginning was a bit buggy too, with the green bars going out of their frame, and seemed quite pointless.
As for the story, I wasn’t really into it. First off, the beginning was confusing as I didn’t really get who was talking. The writing was pretty meh, I found. The story beats themselves were fine, although I haven’t been able to see the end.
The sprites are nice, the backgrounds work. However, it’s missing in transitions, like for exemple, when they hug, they teleport on top of each other then teleport back, not great. The minigames do look great, though! Still confusing, though…
So yeah… I’m afraid it’s pretty bad. Maybe be a little less ambitious next time.