If I had more time to work on it, maybe it could have been better. I did what I could in a limited time packed with other things going on, but I will take that into consideration. As for the confusing speakers, even with the names of the characters in dialogue is it still confusing? Or on the parts with no character names. Could you specify where else I could have done better?
As for "little less ambitious" I'll see what my heart tells me.