The dialogue flowed very well and was engaging the entire time! I really liked how you called attention to how we are feeling in a separate passage, which I expect is feedback for how we are doing in the interview. It helped break things up. I like how you didn't over explain the backstory or context of the world and immersed us in the scene, but I would have liked a bit more to be explained at the beginning so that I knew what this guild was about, how I had almost died, and why I wanted to join it so badly. These are good questions but answering them sooner would help! Overall great job