This game was very enjoyable! I love the quiz aspect that decides your class -- it reminds me of the old Buzzfeed quizzes my friends and I would take in middle school for fun (in a good way!) I was a little confused about the "you feel sick" lines, as I wasn't sure if that was a variable tied to my responses, or just an in-general thing, so I'd like more clarity on that. Besides that, amazing job! I got a rogue!
The dialogue flowed very well and was engaging the entire time! I really liked how you called attention to how we are feeling in a separate passage, which I expect is feedback for how we are doing in the interview. It helped break things up. I like how you didn't over explain the backstory or context of the world and immersed us in the scene, but I would have liked a bit more to be explained at the beginning so that I knew what this guild was about, how I had almost died, and why I wanted to join it so badly. These are good questions but answering them sooner would help! Overall great job
I really enjoyed the humor in the game, got some laughs out of me. I really like the contrast between the two NPC's, it helps to not make me feel excluded or discouraged by either option if at least one has a positive to say about my choice.
I would maybe provide a couple words explaing what a Geroach and Nomth individual is for people who may not be familiar, as the characters appear. Some times with fantasy, having world specific terms given to reader/player with no proper introduction or explainer can have them (me) feeling a little lost.
Positives: Interview/Test was a neat idea, Enjoyed seeing it tracking what I had chosen over time, I liked the attitude between the interviewers
Constructive: Saw a your typo to you on the second passage, found a random 0 on a passage as well, I would watch out for phrases being repeated on the next passage that were on the bottom of the last (I saw one for empty room).
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This game was very enjoyable! I love the quiz aspect that decides your class -- it reminds me of the old Buzzfeed quizzes my friends and I would take in middle school for fun (in a good way!) I was a little confused about the "you feel sick" lines, as I wasn't sure if that was a variable tied to my responses, or just an in-general thing, so I'd like more clarity on that. Besides that, amazing job! I got a rogue!
The dialogue flowed very well and was engaging the entire time! I really liked how you called attention to how we are feeling in a separate passage, which I expect is feedback for how we are doing in the interview. It helped break things up. I like how you didn't over explain the backstory or context of the world and immersed us in the scene, but I would have liked a bit more to be explained at the beginning so that I knew what this guild was about, how I had almost died, and why I wanted to join it so badly. These are good questions but answering them sooner would help! Overall great job
I really enjoyed the humor in the game, got some laughs out of me. I really like the contrast between the two NPC's, it helps to not make me feel excluded or discouraged by either option if at least one has a positive to say about my choice.
I would maybe provide a couple words explaing what a Geroach and Nomth individual is for people who may not be familiar, as the characters appear. Some times with fantasy, having world specific terms given to reader/player with no proper introduction or explainer can have them (me) feeling a little lost.
Positives: Interview/Test was a neat idea, Enjoyed seeing it tracking what I had chosen over time, I liked the attitude between the interviewers
Constructive: Saw a your typo to you on the second passage, found a random 0 on a passage as well, I would watch out for phrases being repeated on the next passage that were on the bottom of the last (I saw one for empty room).