Hey,
Thank you very much for your feedback.
Be assure that all English grammar issues have been fixed. We actually, hired a professional horror writer to help us rewrite the story.
Regarding the art, yes, the current demo doesn't have our latest polished art. We are going to release a new demo on Steam on the 9th of June which will have all latest art and the new story.
Don't forget to wishlist the game on Steam xD
Keep safe!