you said this has very few plays despite being your best writing. The dialog I've read so far is really nice, but the game itself has some annoying stuff: your character's color makes it really hard to find at first, there are both passable and impassable spaces in spots you wouldn't expect, and the noise during the ¿visions? is almost painful. Not trying to be negative, just saying if you want it to reach more people, maybe changing these would help.