the loading screen is super cute, i love bat genzou and rabbit iggy... they r very precious
also really like orlam's design here, his hair looks less ??? than usual haha
iggy feels a lil different here than in ow, ig b/c of the differing tones of the two stories? also probably b/c he has a different backstory now and isn't burdened by Immense Guilt all the time haha
i want to say this iggy feels more chill but he's still very awkward and self-conscious so ig chill is not the right word... but his anxieties feel less based in self-hatred and they're more played for comedy here. i feel like he became significantly more oblivious too lol but it facilitated some fun jokes
i think iggy and genzou have a fun dynamic, i also enjoy the contrast between iggy thinking genzou is the world's most charming man and orlam being very "you are such an artless philistne" lmao
there's a lot of cool stuff done w the sprites too, i really liked the framing of the iggy/genzou dance scene, and iggy vibrating so excitedly when he talks about video games. it was very cute haha
it's very polished and well put together in terms of visuals, and the character dynamics are rly fun. i like the light-hearted tone (even if you do drama and angst very well) and i enjoyed reading it, this was a lot of fun!
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Thank you, ebi!!! It means so much that you played it!! 💕
Hahaha it is definitely an extremely different feel than anything I've worked on before. I attribute it to my malfunctioning state of being 😂 I'm glad you still had fun with the lighter tone and silliness though. I think I really took my characters off the deep end this time.
I'm glad you liked the character dynamics! I hope it'll continue to be fun as I start introducing more characters here and there, too. Even though I'm slightly worried about it becoming a bit chaotic LOL (a bit???) And thank you for the kind words about the sprite work. I ended up relying on them a lot more than a lot of my past stuff, so I was hoping I could still make them feel alive and immersive, especially with a lot of the silly stuff going on. I feel like I haven't done quite this level of sprite work since OFW maybe haha.
I'm really glad you ended up enjoying it! Thank you so much for the really kind comment and rating. Reading it really made my day!! 💕