Oof, the feels. Expertly done. This is simply a great story. The pacing of the first part felt uneven, but when we got to the Last Thoughts department, it became a strength. The relationship between Erin and Cygnus is very compelling. I also really liked the ambiguity of the nature of Cygnus’ death until the reveal at the end. The post-death message makes you think it might be suicide but as we see Cygnus’ memories and feelings, it seems somewhat less likely and indeed, it was a “normal” accident.
Visually, the sprites were really good (Cygnus in a blanket was phenomenal^^) and the simple silhouettes for the characters who couldn’t get a full sprite are really nice as well. The “sci-fi” effects are good, and the CGs were all nice as well. The backgrounds however were a uneven. Notably their scales were all over the place. (And the warehouse bg for Erin’s job seems weird)
As for the audio, the music works well with the action, but maybe it changes a bit too often?
My standout favourite so far, you all did a really great job!