Loved it so much! super heavy and emotional tone, the guitar sounded like it was grieving, but the pace felt like pushing past something, or overcoming something, I really like the ambience you've got and the synths, the instrumentation is absolutely fantastic and your storytelling skills are great here as well, I loved how the end of the track called back to the beginning (not sure if that has any relation to a story i'm unaware of).
The only thing I can say is that the mixing for the track wasn't amazing. I feel like some things were sorta drowned out by the reverb a little, or it just sounded mildly muddy whenever it hit for some reason. still very listenable of course, but the mixing is definitely something to improve on a bit more.
Despite that, I think this is one of the most unique and beautiful tracks I've listened to so far! Thanks so much for the amazing submission! :D