I like this! Its quite unique! I love the idea behind the story you had. The music did fit it well.
I like the tone and direction you took the song. The instruments blended well and you kept it moving with it getting to repetitive. Overall great sound you have. Nothing jumps out at me, so you did really well. Only, as you said, wish you had some more songs!
How did you set up your Valahall supermassive ? I still have not figured out the best way to use that reverb plug in yet.
Great work here!