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★ TyranoBuilder Spring Game Jam 2017! ★ » Community

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Anxo Games7 years ago (1 edit)

I liked the story, it looks really interesting.

Some suggestions:

Put only 1 start.
Watch this video and follow the steps presented, your story will get even better.
Tell the player about NSFW scenes.
Use a better 3D RENDER, if you want to use only drafts use this site, this site or this site.

anilcsrao17 years ago

many thanks - really appreciate the feedback