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My Submittal for the Tyranobuilder Jam 2017 - a DEMO of a larger project

A topic by anilcsrao1 created Apr 16, 2017 Views: 175 Replies: 2
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Please - I know its a "longshot" but take a look at my Visual Novel and give me feedback - after a DISASTOROUS premiere on Steam Greenlight ( 8 Yes 38 No) I decided to go back to work on this one.....any Feedback would be awesome and appreciated for the next 2 year gap between Jams when I can really get good at this Engine (Ive been at it for 2 weeks).

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I liked the story, it looks really interesting.

Some suggestions:

many thanks - really appreciate the feedback