Thank you so much for the comment! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, especially since this is the very first Interactive Fiction I've ever made. I've been a little nervous about the results, but your feedback helps a lot. If you don't mind sharing, what part of the story did you enjoy the most?
That's such high praise from you, thank you! I was actually a bit nervous when I first saw your submission. I noticed that the core concept looked very similar to mine, and I could tell you were much more fluent with Twine than I am. But after playing yours, I realized that while the core idea is similar, the approach is completely different. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story!