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Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoy the story.

I played the game, that is an exciting experience. There are already 1 carrot on the respawn point. I am still not yet explore the cave-world tho.

That is a fast updated considering the time and how big the update is. Keep up the good work.

I actually want to just comment instead of starting new topic on the community message board. But I don't know how to do that, it seems I can't find where to give a comment. 
I already tried your game, and I got a Minecraft and Palworld vibe from your game. The visual is beautiful. I already roam two biomes in your game. I don't know if there are any crafting features in the future. Loved what you are doing there.

I wonder what happen to Will's past. I hope i can find it at chapter 2 later on.

It is working well on my phone. All the button are working as intended all the way through the end of the chapter 1.

Thank you for the encouragement. I certainly hope my next projects will be better! I do intend to finish this one first, though. I can't leave the readers hanging without a proper ending! :) I also wish you the best of luck with finishing your game.

That's such high praise from you, thank you! I was actually a bit nervous when I first saw your submission. I noticed that the core concept looked very similar to mine, and I could tell you were much more fluent with Twine than I am. But after playing yours, I realized that while the core idea is similar, the approach is completely different. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story!

Thank you so much for the comment! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, especially since this is the very first Interactive Fiction I've ever made. I've been a little nervous about the results, but your feedback helps a lot. If you don't mind sharing, what part of the story did you enjoy the most?

Really interesting ending! I can't believe you can make a scale like that to determine where did i place on morality spectrum. The story itself is quite simple, yet the education you give for that simple story is balanced. You did not lean to any one moral philosophy.

I hope you can give rating  and comment to my submitted game, it really means a lot if you do

I really love the art. I can't stress enough how awesome your art is. For the story itself, I can feel the depression from the third viewpoint. If I make the examples, I understand his/her feeeling if he/she tells me. The ending itself is quite sad, i try different option to stop the main character to end the day, but it seems it only has 2 ending so far. Sadly, it is only short so I can't really invest in the main character yet. 

I hope you can give rating  and comment to my submitted game, it really means a lot if you do so.