ill say this "you got lucky" i was about to drop this vn after the cold opening and somewhat terrible corny writing in the beggining but after me and my friend pass that opening this story hooked us like a fishing rod,
There's no words to describe how much I and my friend felt in love with the political drama and universe you have set here, and i await with obsolute intrigue for the next updates,
that said i few nitpicks of the story, for starters the eyes nearly made me laugh and could have done better to make the reader feel dread when they saw it, maybe making the eyes blank as to give away that since that what ever you are speaking with is beyond the living and a few "horror" parts that could have been done with a bit more kick with the imagery like seeing your friends with black eyes to signified that they are either dead or possesed giving the horror of watching your friends being lost to the darkness,