I played the demo, i liked it, i think this game has a lot of potential. But i think you should do a better tutorial, especially if someone wants to use a controller to play it. Starting with a story cutscene is better, i know it's a demo but it's easier for someone to follow the flow in this way. When i played the visual novel part it was a little buggy but i think you already know that. Is the recollection scene section a flowchart? You have multiple protagonists from what i understood of the demo and your game page.
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