interesting..
Not bad, and it’s going on my list. I adore D, and W hit me like a truck. Dang.
ran into a decent amount of immersion-breaking pronoun stuff; I chose to romance D as Dumitra, and during the most of romance scenes (plus some others) there were just random ‘he’ and ‘ his’ or ‘him’ sprinkled throughout the text where it should have been she/her/hers which did a number on the vibe. Oh, well. Small stuff, I suppose