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It was too hard for me, but it was an original, interesting concept that matches the theme well. The music and little SFX on top of the text box scrolling were done really well. I might suggest for the future: export to WebGL so that people can play without downloading, especially for a jam! The movement has too much momentum, try using GetAxisRaw instead of GetAxis if that's what you're using for that.

Thank you for advice  :)