This is unusual, I don’t think we’ve seen an ectocomp entry quite like this before. It’s good to see new things. I did like it. I do think some of the pauses are too long though, a few times I was wondering if the poem had finished or not. (Including at the end, I was pretty sure it’d finished, but due to the long previous wait time I wasn’t sure.) It’d (IMO) almost be better to make parts of the poem go much faster to create a sense of urgency/fear, and then lower the wait times on the slower text.