Keep it up, man! I'd recommend learning about mixing, I noticed some clipping. Theres very many ways to go about it. But I'd suggest starting all the volumes at the bottom and bringing one thing up at a time. That way you can leave some more headroom when it comes to the volume. You dont want it going over 0db especially without a clipper or limiter. Id also recommend tuning your bass to the root note of your chords. Its harder when using loops but its a crucial step in music production. Hope to see you in future jams :)
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Oh also forgot to add, when doing something based off a theme: be somewhat picky with the sounds you use. If the theme is space, some instruments like a sitar or mandolin or other worldly instruments arent gonna sound very "spacey." Albeit, a piano or strings or an effected guitar can make it work. Just try and keep in mind the atmosphere youre working with when selecting your sounds.