https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2616423853
While I love VNs, I'm very much NOT the target audience for this kind of VN, so some parts made me... act up. However - I love the artstyle (mostly, Hazel's vampire mode is a bit TOO ugly even by VTMB Nosferatu standards lol), and by the end of my playthrough I was actually fairly engaged in the writing. I also very much dig how much detail you put into the world, describing the accents and whatnot.
Pacing also seems good, "fish outta water" done right I'd say. At least for my taste.
Honestly - this is an insanely good demo. I do wonder how you'll develop the story, keep it up!