I love the fall vibe :) I like a brownish palette and I'd like to see you do something like that again, but maybe vary the saturation to call attention to certain things. Thanks for taking my comment to heart - I try to make comments that critique the things I really like, if that makes sense.
The minigame does help to break up the monotony of reading through the text - I think that came across very well!
Thanks! This is my thirtieth visual novel so far. So, I have other short stories you can read on here for free that are in the form of visual novels. Sometimes I like to go with a certain color in my visual novels, whether that be blue, pink, gray, or green. Otherwise, I’m in the works of making a visual novel in RPG Maker right now. The big difference there is that it’ll involve some light walking to get from one place to the next or to make a choice in the game. Of course, I’ll still use Ren’Py for future visual novels, but I’m trying to spice things up too for future games as well. Take care! Love the feedback! 😃😊
