While I liked the layout in terms of art, the text felt quite packed for legibility.
Would have numbered the Surveillance Data sections with their own numeration, even if 4A / 6A, to help with readability as well.
The vengeful android chasing vengeance on her former self was quite a powerful idea! Having the players feel like they are chasing a murderer going on a rampage is quite nice and in vibe for the world of Mothership.