Chef’s Kiss!
This is a fantastic mix of form and function! my only knocks were:
- i think you should move the “How to Use this Scenario” on to panel 2. As it is now i didn’t read it until the very last thing and I think that having in your head “okay this is how i’m going to use this” while reading the locations and the monsters helps to frame things for maximum results.
- and this is a very small thing, but i think you should move the Map to the middle of the spread (swap it from panel 3 to panel 4.) as it stands now I looked over the locations in the map then read about them, rather than read about them then saw them…
again those are the TINYEST of knitpicks, and its honestly more to have something to say than anything else.
Congrats, Xiaofang! you made something very Rad! and a very good contender for my personal favorite that i’ve seen so far, and a high bar to overcome! (about 1/3rd through reviews at the time of writing)