A couple quick notes (sorry for similarities to my notes on Contingency Crew)
- while not as bad as contingency crew the Kerning/Tracking is a bit tight here.
- d4 and d6 aren’t typically used in Mothership, not the end of the world but sticking with D5s or D10s tends to be a safer bet for utility amongst the game itself.
- most importantly I would love to see something in the way of a ruleset to determine HOW the PC’s find the clues, or HOW they Scrub up etc… also ways that they could PLANT clues could be a fun addition as well. As of right now space is fairly tight but I would argue that you don’t really need the Style/“MENU” don’t get me wrong i like that you have a random generated style of restaurant but especially if you are going to do this more than once in a campaign (which the module implies) then this becomes useless after the first time… Dotties could just be _____ style restaurant and I don’t think the module would suffer much for it, and this would give you room for other things like rules to run the investigation!
Okay i know that was a lot of knitpicks which isn’t fun, but honestly i pick at this one because i think its very close to being quite good/useful for generating some quick fun!
Hope you polish this one just a bit more, I know it can be awesome!