I always find it impressive when someone makes a game with proper mechanics using Ren'py.
Expected her hair to be more red when Saan commented on it being red by default. I see you've been told that the hair dying event can be played indefinitely, and aware of the demo getting stuck at the first feeding.
In my opinion I think it leads you on a bit too much on a linear path, then pretends to give you the reigns only to be able to pick two side-paths, and then back to the linear main plot a bit more, but I understand that storytelling is often a matter of preference. But I figured I should say something.
Music loops well.